homework(mon)
학생이 쓴 원문
1. My mother,father and sister are coming to dinner tonight.
2. I like learning English. it makes me tired.
3. My sister was taller than me when we were young. Now I am the tallest. it is fun.
4. I love learning in school. because my teacher is nice.
5. I just don’t want much some chocolates and a little toy car for christmas.
6. Blue is my favorite color it is the color of the sky and the sea. it reminds me of my favorite insect which is the butterfly. (Is butterfly blue?)
7. When I get older I want to have a big family. Because I like big families.
8. We usually leave at 11:00 but today, we are leaving at 10:30.
9. I like Tuesdays, Wednesdays and Fridays because the weekend starts on
10. We should get moving there’s no time to waste.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Do,
Thank you for sending your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
1. My mother, father and sister are coming to dinner tonight.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> My parents and my sister are coming to dinner tonight.
2. I like learning English. it makes me tired.
>> I like learning English, but it makes me tired.
>> I like learning English, but it makes me tired.
3. My sister was taller than me when we were young. Now I am the tallest. it is fun.
>> My sister was taller than me when we were young. Now I am the tallest, which is fun.
4. I love learning in school. because my teacher is nice.
>> I love school and learning. I have a nice teacher.
5. I just don’t want much some chocolates and a little toy car for christmas.
>> I don’t want much for Christmas just some chocolates and a little toy car.
>> I don’t want much for Christmas just some chocolates and a little toy car.
6. Blue is my favorite color it is the color of the sky and the sea. it reminds me of my favorite insect which is the butterfly. (Is butterfly blue?)
>> Blue is my favorite color. It is the color of the sky and the sea. Also, it reminds me of my favorite insect which is the butterfly.
>> Blue is my favorite color. It is the color of the sky and the sea. Also, it reminds me of my favorite insect which is the butterfly.
7. When I get older I want to have a big family. Because I like big families.
>> When I get older I want to have a big family; I like big families.
8. We usually leave at 11:00 but today, we are leaving at 10:30.
>> We usually leave at 11:00 but today is different; we are leaving at 10:30.
>> When I get older I want to have a big family; I like big families.
8. We usually leave at 11:00 but today, we are leaving at 10:30.
>> We usually leave at 11:00 but today is different; we are leaving at 10:30.
9. I like Tuesdays, Wednesdays and Fridays because the weekend starts on
>> I like Tuesdays and Wednesdays. I also like Fridays, because the weekend starts on Friday.
>> I like Tuesdays and Wednesdays. I also like Fridays, because the weekend starts on Friday.
10. We should get moving there’s no time to waste.
>> We should get moving. There’s no time to waste.
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