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1) I (have/has) __have_seen________ (to see) the Statue of Liberty before.
2) They (have/has) __have_written________ (to write) ten letters to the governor.
3) James (have/has) __has_been________ (to be) to Canada twice.
4) The students (have/has) __have_done________ (to do) their homework.
5) Have you ___caught________ (to catch) a baseball before?
6) He (have/has) __has_eaten____ (to eat) three pieces of chocolate cake today.
7) My heart has been __broken_________ (to break) before.
8) Have you ___forgotten________ (to forget) the password?
9) Have you ___chosen________ (to choose) a name for your new baby?
10) All the money have been ___stolen________ (to steal) from the bank.
11) If the enemy sinks another battleship, they will (have/has) ___have_sunk_______ (to sink) five of them today.
Teacher~ please, correct my grammar errors.
1. This aviation school is very famous in usa.
Also, the weather is always sunny and clear in the city. I think flight environment is great.
2. I'll study about a year.
3. After studying, I hope I'll be back in korea 1year from now and get into one of the local airlines here. I'll chalenge three times. If I don't get into local airlines I'll apply for other company. I have 5 year's experience. But I can do it~!!
4. This school has authorized curriculums also the city has great flight environment. I think I can study aviation in the school well.
5. I worked at food company called from ABC for 5 years and I engaged in sales support and marketing. I resigned my company to study aviation.
6. When I worked at the company I save the money for the future.
If I'm short of money my parents promised they will support me.
7. My father was a director in a construction company. He retired to take a rest. my mother stays at home and take care of the house.
8. Accidentally, I was attracted to fly in the sky controlling airplane directly by my hand. when I attended aerospace fair in seoul.
So I have decided to be a pilot.
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Hello [이름] Do,
Thank you for answering your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
1) I (have/has) __have_seen________ (to see) the Statue of Liberty before.
>> Correct!
2) They (have/has) __have_written________ (to write) ten letters to the governor.
2) They (have/has) __have_written________ (to write) ten letters to the governor.
>> Correct!
3) James (have/has) __has_been________ (to be) to Canada twice.
3) James (have/has) __has_been________ (to be) to Canada twice.
>> Correct!
4) The students (have/has) __have_done________ (to do) their homework.
4) The students (have/has) __have_done________ (to do) their homework.
>> Correct!
5) Have you ___caught________ (to catch) a baseball before?
5) Have you ___caught________ (to catch) a baseball before?
>> Correct!
6) He (have/has) __has_eaten____ (to eat) three pieces of chocolate cake today.
6) He (have/has) __has_eaten____ (to eat) three pieces of chocolate cake today.
>> Correct!
7) My heart has been __broken_________ (to break) before.
7) My heart has been __broken_________ (to break) before.
>> Correct!
8) Have you ___forgotten________ (to forget) the password?
8) Have you ___forgotten________ (to forget) the password?
>> Correct!
9) Have you ___chosen________ (to choose) a name for your new baby?
9) Have you ___chosen________ (to choose) a name for your new baby?
>> Correct!
10) All the money have been ___stolen________ (to steal) from the bank.
10) All the money have been ___stolen________ (to steal) from the bank.
>> has
11) If the enemy sinks another battleship, they will (have/has)
11) If the enemy sinks another battleship, they will (have/has)
___have_sunk_______ (to sink) five of them today.
>> Correct!
1. This aviation school is very famous in usa.
1. This aviation school is very famous in usa.
>> This aviation school is very famous in USA.
Also, the weather is always sunny and clear in the city. I think flight environment is great.
Also, the weather is always sunny and clear in the city. I think flight environment is great.
>> The weather is always sunny and the sky is clear. I think the flight environment is perfect.
2. I\'ll study about a year.
2. I\'ll study about a year.
>> I will study next year.
3. After studying, I hope I\'ll be back in korea 1year from now and get into one of the local airlines here. I\'ll chalenge three times. If I don\'t get into local airlines I\'ll apply for other company. I have 5 year\'s experience. But I can do it~!!
3. After studying, I hope I\'ll be back in korea 1year from now and get into one of the local airlines here. I\'ll chalenge three times. If I don\'t get into local airlines I\'ll apply for other company. I have 5 year\'s experience. But I can do it~!!
>> After a year, I hope I can come back to Korea and get into one of the local airlines. I\'ll try it for three times. If I can\'t make it, I\'ll apply to other companies. I know I can do because I\'m confident with my 5 years experience.
4. This school has authorized curriculums also the city has great flight environment. I think I can study aviation in the school well.
4. This school has authorized curriculums also the city has great flight environment. I think I can study aviation in the school well.
>> This school has accredited curriculum and has a great flight environment. I believe I can learn about aviation well.
5. I worked at food company called from ABC for 5 years and I engaged in sales support and marketing. I resigned my company to study aviation.
5. I worked at food company called from ABC for 5 years and I engaged in sales support and marketing. I resigned my company to study aviation.
>> I worked at a food company called ABC for 5 years and I was engaged in sales support and marketing. I resigned to study aviation.
6. When I worked at the company I save the money for the future.
If I\'m short of money my parents promised they will support me.
6. When I worked at the company I save the money for the future.
If I\'m short of money my parents promised they will support me.
>> I saved money from my previous work. And in case I will run short of money, my parents promised that they will help me.
7. My father was a director in a construction company. He retired to take a rest. my mother stays at home and take care of the house.
7. My father was a director in a construction company. He retired to take a rest. my mother stays at home and take care of the house.
>> My father was a director in a construction company. He retired so he could take a rest while my mother stays at home and take care of our house.
8. Accidentally, I was attracted to fly in the sky controlling airplane directly by my hand. when I attended aerospace fair in seoul.
So I have decided to be a pilot.
8. Accidentally, I was attracted to fly in the sky controlling airplane directly by my hand. when I attended aerospace fair in seoul.
So I have decided to be a pilot.
>> When I attended an aerospace fair in Seoul, I suddenly got attracted to it. I was overwhelmed when I was controlling the airplane with my bare hands. From that day on, I decided to become a pilot.
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