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Where is the best place for you to go to when you have problems and why?
>> when i face problems, i usually right go back to my home. this place made me feel more comfortable more than other places.
강사 첨삭
You are right, handsome!
I prefer to stay at home when I encounter problems.
In that way, we can make good decisions and we can self-reflect.
Nothing beats the atmosphere at home.
Talk to you very soon.
Teacher Nina
Where is the best place for you to go to when you have problems and why?
>> when i face problems, i usually right go back to my home.
>> When I face problems, I usually go right back home.
>> Better: When I face problems, I usually go home immediately.
this place made me feel more comfortable more than other places.
>> The place makes me feel more comfortable more than any other place.
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