Homework(my expectations about the job)
학생이 쓴 원문
I want you to consider that I actually applied for the job to assist my superior Product Manager of LG Electronics in Nigeria. And I'm expected to have a second interview on around May.
I expect to learn a lot about the process of producing, promoting and even selling the electric appliance that will be under my responsibility. And I also hope to learn Nigeria's culture and history including Africa's. In my case, the chance to work in the field I want is more important to me than getting more money and having a good working conditions. I want to devote my entire career to Africa.
강사 첨삭
I thought this is rather different from most of the answers I\'ve heard from my other students. Not a lot of people would choose to work in Africa but you do have a point. People who have noble goals like you do are the people who really live their lives and become happy. ^^ I\'m sure you will be too in the days to come.
T.Aurora
I want you to consider that I actually applied for the job to assist my superior Product Manager of LG Electronics in Nigeria.
>>I want you to consider that I actually applied for a job to assist my superior Product Manager of LG Electronics in Nigeria. And I\'m expected to have a second interview on around May.>>And I\'m expected to have a second interview in around May.I expect to learn a lot about the process of producing, promoting and even selling the electric appliance that will be under my responsibility.
>>I expect to learn a lot about the process of producing, promoting and even selling the electric appliances that will be under my responsibility.
And I also hope to learn Nigeria\'s culture and history including Africa\'s.
>>Correct!
In my case, the chance to work in the field I want is more important to me than getting more money and having a good working conditions.
>>In my case, the chance to work in the field I want is more important to me than getting more money and having a good working condition.
I want to devote my entire career to Africa.
>>Correct!
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