Homework-My fondest childhood memory.
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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:
Tell about one of your fondest childhood memories.
One of my fondest childhood memories is when I was in elementary school.
When I went to elementary school, I played with my cousin and friends at the playground every day.
After school class, I put my luggage at home and meet friends to go to the playground.
We played together for several times and eat some snack at the snack shop.
We changed the game every day. And we hung out together even we met first.
And around 7 pm, our parents turn to bring us to the school and had dinner with my family together.
Sometimes, we took a nap with my cousin at home & had dinner together after playing.
That was my daily normal life and fondest childhood memory.
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==Teacher Charlie==
One of my fondest childhood memories is when I was in elementary school.
>> One of my fondest childhood memories was back when I was in elementary school.
When I went to elementary school, I played with my cousin and friends at the playground every day.After school class, I put my luggage at home and meet friends to go to the playground.
>> When I was in elementary school, I played with my cousin and friends at the playground everyday where I would leave my bag at home after school then meet my friends at the playground.
We played together for several times and eat some snack at the snack shop.We changed the game every day. And we hung out together even we met first.
>> We would play for sometime then eat some snacks at a store. We would change the games we play everyday and we would hang out even though we just met.
And around 7 pm, our parents turn to bring us to the school and had dinner with my family together.Sometimes, we took a nap with my cousin at home & had dinner together after playing.That was my daily normal life and fondest childhood memory.
>> At around 7PM, our parents would come to bring us to school or we would have dinner. There are times when I would take a nap with my cousin at their house and have dinner. That was my routine back then and one of my fondest childhood memories.
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