Homework(My rural life)

2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Hi, teacher it's Monday, but I'm happy because it's my life~have a nice day^^ Usually we can asked about a rural life. For example, "Is it better to live in the city or the country ? " In my opinion, country is better for me. Because, country living is an emotionally healthier place for people When I was young, I lived in a country village. I was reconciled to living in the country. I still remember catching frogs and Grasshoppers at that time with my friends. We often goes for a jog at any time through the grassland. Our house was located by a broad plain which spread before us. There were a fine view of the countryside and it's fantastic and beautiful. My country is also a well - known rice - producing district. Finally, When I am older, I want to leave the city to live in the country again. It is a wonderful place to live and relax. Someday, I have a dream to built a house in the country.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름]! Thanks for sharing me your thoughts about living in a rural area.

But for me, I prefer living in the city for now. When I get older, I\'d rather move in a countryside.

Enjoy life! ^^

~~May~~

Usually we can asked about a rural life. For example, \"Is it better to live in the city or the country ? \"

>> Usually, we ask about the life in a rural area. Is it better to live in the city or in the countryside?

In my opinion, country is better for me. Because, country living is an emotionally healthier place for people
>> In my opinion, I prefer living in the countryside because it is a peaceful place for people.
When I was young, I lived in a country village.

>> CORRECT

I was reconciled to living in the country.

>> I got used to live in the countryside.

I still remember catching frogs and Grasshoppers at that time with my friends.

>> CORRECT

We often goes for a jog at any time through the grassland. 

>> We often went for a jog any time in the grassland. 

Our house was located by a broad plain which spread before us.

>> Our house was located near a wide plain land.

There were a fine view of the countryside and it\'s fantastic and beautiful.

>> There was a fine view of the countryside and it\'s fantastic and beautiful.

My country is also a well - known rice - producing district.
>>
My country is also well - known for rice - producing district. 
Finally, When I am older, I want to leave the city to live in the country again.

>> Now that I got older, I like to live in the countryside again.

It is a wonderful place to live and relax.

>> CORRECT

Someday, I have a dream to built a house in the country.

> Someday, I dream to build a house in the countryside.

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