HOMEWORK: Name anything you would like to improve about yourself.
학생이 쓴 원문
there a problem that i really fix it.
i have a li of i want to do , so i try various things.
but i lack persistence.
so i try to do it until the end.
for example, i tried english but failed many times.
but now i will try until good.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Eve!~
It\'s wonderful to know you have something like a bucket list. Trying various things in life is good for our self-development as we allow ourselves to experience whatever we can. So, I hope you will be able to tick them all ^^
Chammy:)
there a problem that i really fix it.
>> If there\'s a really fix it.
>> If there\'s a really fix it.
i have a li of i want to do , so i try various things.
>> I have a list of what I want to do, so I try various things.
but i lack persistence.
>> But I lack persistence.
>> But I lack persistence.
so i try to do it until the end.
>> Even though, I still try to do it until the end.
>> Even though, I still try to do it until the end.
for example, i tried english but failed many times.
>> For example, I tried English but I failed many times.
>> For example, I tried English but I failed many times.
but now i will try until good.
>> However, I will keep on trying until I improve.
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