Homework-Need to support for university to sports activity.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
I agree the statement above. I think university should make students develop with a variety of ways.
Libraries could help students have much knowledge and develop academically.
But I guess it is important for students not only knowledge but also sports activity.
Actually by doing other activity, they could be more active to their academic and experience diverse sports in university. For my experience, I used to be more motive and active by swimming in university. It always made me be positive to other field.
Therefore, I support that statement above.
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==Teacher Charlie==
I agree the statement above. I think university should make students develop with a variety of ways.
>> I agree that universities should give the same amount of funding to their students\' sports activities as they give to their libraries because I think that universities should develop their students in a variety of ways.
Libraries could help students have much knowledge and develop academically.But I guess it is important for students not only knowledge but also sports activity.
Actually by doing other activity, they could be more active to their academic and experience diverse sports in university.
>> Libraries are made to help students gain much knowledge as well as develop them academically but in my opnion, sports are as important as academic knowledge in students. Actually in doing other activities, this will increase the student\'s performance in academia and athleticism.
For my experience, I used to be more motive and active by swimming in university. It always made me be positive to other field.Therefore, I support that statement above.
>> In my experience, swimming in university made me more motivated and active in pursuing other fields. This is why I support the idea that universities should give the same amount of funding to their students\' sports activities as they give to their libraries.
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