Homework(Nov. 10)
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Some forecast that the Biden victory will lead to the North committing a military provocation to capture the attention of the new U.S. president and seek to get him committed to the nuclear issue. Do you support this statement?
I believe that it\'s highly possible to happen because it\'s true that the North has carried out military provocations to capture the attention of the world when they\'re driven into trouble. The North has maintained a self-imposed on nuclear since 2017 due to the international sanction, but they had tested several missiles off its coast or sometimes attacked a territory of S.Korea, e.g the shelling at Yongpyong Island and the sinking of the Cheonan naval ship in 2010. Pyongyang had been always sending to us signals of an impending military strike and is still fighting against the U.S. imperialism since the Korean War. To maintain their regime as democratic republic, they need strong weapons and show us they are still a strong country by a military provocation.
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The North has maintained a self-imposed on nuclear since 2017 due to the international sanction, but they had tested several missiles off its coast or sometimes attacked a territory of S.Korea, e.g the shelling at Yongpyong Island and the sinking of the Cheonan naval ship in 2010.
>> The North has maintained a self-imposed on nuclear since 2017 due to the international sanction, but they had tested several missiles off its coast or sometimes attacked a territory of South Korea, the shelling at Yongpyong Island and the sinking of the Cheonan naval ship in 2010.
Pyongyang had been always sending to us signals of an impending military strike and is still fighting against the U.S. imperialism since the Korean War. To maintain their regime as democratic republic, they need strong weapons and show us they are still a strong country by a military provocation.
>> Pyongyang has always been sending us signals of an impending military strike and is still fighting against the U.S. imperialism since the Korean War.
To maintain their regime as democratic republic, they need strong weapons and show us they are still a strong country by a military provocation.
>>To maintain their regime as a democratic republic, they need strong weapons and show us they are still a strong country by a military provocation.
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