Homework Nov 11th

2019-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I think the most patient person is my mother. My mother always does chores like washing dish, cooking and cleaning rooms. Also, She always takes care of me and our dogs everyday.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think the most patient person is my mother.

>> I think the most patient person for me is my mother.
My mother always does chores like washing dish, cooking and cleaning rooms.

>> My mother always does chores like washing the dishes, cooking, and cleaning the rooms.
Also, She always takes care of me and our dogs everyday.

>> She also always takes care of me and our dogs everyday.

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