Homework Nov 13th

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I get rid of bad habits as thinking repeatedly.

>> I get rid of bad habits by repeatedly thinking about it.
Habit is scaring me because of unconsciousness.

>> Bad habits are scary for me because I tend do it unconsciously.
These cause my errors and faults.

>> These causes my errors and mistakes.
Therefore, as repeating thinking my will for correction of habit, I could be better.

>> Therefore, by repeatedly thinking about my will for correcting my bad habits, I am able improve myself.