Homework Nov 15th

2019-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I learned to drive a car when I was 25 years old. The lecturer taught me the way to drive and park. After I got license, I practiced hard driving a car. Now, I\'m skillful for driving.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I learned to drive a car when I was 25 years old.

>> I learned how to drive a car when I was 25 years old.
The lecturer taught me the way to drive and park.

>> The lecturer taught me how to drive and park a car.
After I got license, I practiced hard driving a car.

>> After I got a driver\'s license, I practiced hard on driving a car.
Now, I\'m skillful for driving.

>> Now, I\'m skillful at driving.

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