Homework(Nov. 16)
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What personality trait has gotten you In the most trouble?
The personality which makes me have gotten in the most trouble is rudeness. I think we all need to be respected as human beings, it doesn\'t matter of jobs, races, ages, genders and nationalities. If someone treated me impolitely, I would easily get lost my temper and being furious. Getting hurt other\'s emotions is the worst thing with people without any reasons. We need to think about the situation in their shoes. So I\'m always trying to smile when I have a conversation with others and make them in a good mood. I strongly believe that is a minimum etiquette with each other.
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Thank you for answering my question. :)
What personality trait has gotten you In the most trouble?
>> Correct.
The personality which makes me have gotten in the most trouble is rudeness.
>> Correct.
I think we all need to be respected as human beings, it doesn\'t matter of jobs, races, ages, genders and nationalities.
>> I think we all need to be respected as human beings. It doesn\'t matter what jobs, races, ages, genders, and nationalities we have.
If someone treated me impolitely, I would easily get lost my temper and being furious.
>> If someone treated me impolitely, I would easily lose my temper and become furious.
Getting hurt other\'s emotions is the worst thing with people without any reasons.
>> Getting hurt by other people\'s emotions is the worst thing especially if without any reason.
We need to think about the situation in their shoes.
>> We need to think about the situation of other people or try to be in their shoes.
So I\'m always trying to smile when I have a conversation with others and make them in a good mood.
>> Correct.
I strongly believe that is a minimum etiquette with each other.
>> I strongly believe that it is the minimum etiquette we can have with each other.
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