Homework Nov 27th

2019-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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The times of the year that I give gifts are my parents\' birthdays. Since I don\'t have a girlfriend, I don\'t have to care about other anniversary. So, On those days I give birthday presents to my parents.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The times of the year that I give gifts are my parents\' birthdays.

>> The time of the year that I give gifts are only on my parent\'s birthdays.
Since I don\'t have a girlfriend, I don\'t have to care about other anniversary.

>> Since I don\'t have a girlfriend, I don\'t have to worry about anniversaries.
So, On those days I give birthday presents to my parents.

>> So on those days, I give birthday presents to my parents.

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