Homework Nov 29th

2019-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I have never ridden a horse before. I have ever sawn a person who ride a horse. I want to ride a horse, but I don\'t try to ride a horse because its kick is very dangerous to death.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I have never ridden a horse before.

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> I have never tried riding a horse before.
I have ever sawn a person who ride a horse.

>> I have never seen a person riding a horse.
I want to ride a horse, but I don\'t try to ride a horse because its kick is very dangerous to death.

>>I want to ride a horse, but I don\'t want to try because its kick is very dangerous and it can kill you.

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