Homework Nov 4th

2019-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

In my case, I would like to go and live in Japan. There are a lot of restaurants which are famous for delicious foods. Also, There are amusing places like universal studio in Osaka.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
In my case, I would like to go and live in Japan.
>> CORRECT!
There are a lot of restaurants which are famous for delicious foods.
>> There are a lot of restaurants that are famous for their delicious foods.
Also, There are amusing places like universal studio in Osaka.
>> Also, there are amusing places like the Universal Studio in Osaka.

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