Homework Nov 8th
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello GeunYeong!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
My happiness is freedom.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> For me, happiness is freedom.
Freedom means I can do whatever.
>> Freedom means I can do whatever I want whenever I want.
So, I\'m happy of the activities I like such as playing computer games, going to bed and hang out my friends.
>> So I\'m happy about the activities I am able to do such as, playing computer games, going to bed, and hanging out with my friends.
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