homework!!!number 2
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1. Which season is the most comfortable for you? Why?: I like summer&fall&winter.because in summer,I can go swimming,In fall(setember)is my birthday.In winter, I can make a snowman.:)
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday Violet!
You really love making snowman. :) I wish there\'s a snow here, too. :)
Have a great day and thank you for doing your homework. :)
sincerely,
Teacher Lucy
I like summer&fall&winter.
>>I like summer, fall and winter.
because in summer,I can go swimming,
>>Because in summer I can go swimming.
In fall(setember)is my birthday.
>>In fall, in September, is my birthday.
In winter, I can make a snowman.:)
>>CORRECT!
>>I can make snowman in winter.
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