homework!!!number2
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
HELLO THERE VIOLET ^-^
Thank you so much for answering this question despite of your tight schedule.
I hope you just didn\'t answered the question but also understood how the sentence construction is.
Have a happy Children Day tomorrow! ^^
~ Teacher Ivah ^-^/
1. Spring begins in the northern part of America. First, the forsythia tree bursts into blossoms; then the dogwood trees begin to bloom, and the redbud is soon in its perfect timing.
>> CORRECT!
2. Our valedictorian in school often seems to show a lot in English. His essays, too, indicate a powerful message to us youth.
>> Our valedictorian in school often seems to show a lot in English. His essays, too, indicated a powerful message to us youth.
3. We have never seen this kind of impatience from my daughter before. We think it has something to do with this weather?
>> We have never seen this kind of impatience from my daughter before. You think it has something to do with this weather?
4. The climate of Japan can be a pleasure for you if you don\'t mind the rain.
>> CORRECT!
5. My aunt Mina told us about her trip here in Korea. Seeing her brother again was a real treat.
>> CORRECT!
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