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학생이 쓴 원문
I think my best gift that I ever gave to another person is last year my friend\'s birthday gift.
This friend\'s make event for my birthday oftenly so this time I prepared some birthday event with another friend.
She likes the movie name \'Coraline\' so our event concept is \'Coraline\'.
we make props of \'Coraline\' like picture that I uploaded and hide them everywhere in our neighborhood.
We looked down at her through the upper window of the building and she started hunting for treasures while carrying a camera.
She looked as happy as we prepared for the event, and this is the most memorable gift and birthday event that I gave to another person.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
WOW! Thank you so much for sharing pictures of your treasure hunt gift for your friend ^_^ You\'re such a great friend for preparing such a sweet gift! I admire the effort you did.
Regards,
T. Angelica
I think my best gift that I ever gave to another person is last year my friend\'s birthday gift.>>I think the best gift that I ever gave to another person was the birthday gift I gave to my friend last year.
This friend\'s make event for my birthday oftenly so this time I prepared some birthday event with another friend.
This friend\'s make event for my birthday oftenly so this time I prepared some birthday event with another friend.
>> This friend often made an effort to celebrate my birthday so this time, I wanted to prepare something for her.
She likes the movie name \'Coraline\' so our event concept is \'Coraline\'.
She likes the movie name \'Coraline\' so our event concept is \'Coraline\'.
>>She likes the movie \"Coraline\" so we chose that theme for her birthday.
we make props of \'Coraline\' like picture that I uploaded and hide them everywhere in our neighborhood.
we make props of \'Coraline\' like picture that I uploaded and hide them everywhere in our neighborhood.
>>We made props of \"Coraline\" and hid them everywhere in our neighborhood as a kind of treasure hunt.
We looked down at her through the upper window of the building and she started hunting for treasures while carrying a camera.
We looked down at her through the upper window of the building and she started hunting for treasures while carrying a camera.
>> She carried a camera and we watched her do the treasure hunt through the upper window of a building.
She looked as happy as we prepared for the event, and this is the most memorable gift and birthday event that I gave to another person.
She looked as happy as we prepared for the event, and this is the most memorable gift and birthday event that I gave to another person.
>>She looked as happy as we did when we were preparing her treasure hunt.
>> This is the most memorable gift and birthday event that I ever did for another person.
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