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I think that there are four reasons.
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First, we can get lessons from the stories so we can be good people.
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>>First, we can learn lessons from the stories so we can be good people.
Second, we can get some information. (For example: If you read a book about great people, you can know more about great people.)
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Third, we can develope our imagination.
>>Third, we can develop our imagination.
Fourth, as we read more books, we are able to write better.
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I think that there are four reasons. First, we can learn lessons from the stories so we can be good people. Second, we can get some information. For example, if you read a book about great people, you will know more about them. Third, we can develop our imagination. Fourth, as we read more books, we are able to write better.
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