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Paking for trip,
>> Packing for a trip.
we should pack clothes, money and water.
>> We should pack some clothes, bring enough money and bring water.
If I do the laundry I need another clothes to wear.
>> If I just did the laundry, that means I have to look for other clothes to wear.
We need money to buy something.
>> CORRECT
If we don\'t drink water, we die for short time.
>> If we don\'t drink water, we\'ll surely die in no time.
Paking for trip, we shouldn\'t pack jewelies, clothes which is so heavy and TV. Because a robber can kill me, and heavy clothes and TV are hard to carry.
>> When packing for a trip, we shouldn\'t bring jewelries, heavy clothes and TV because a pickpocket might get the jewelries we packed. Not to mention, heavy and clothes and TV are hard to carry.
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