Homework Oct 11th
학생이 쓴 원문
In my case, My favorite season is summer. First of all, I can do sports and exercise.
I can\'t do exercise in winter because of low temperature.
Next, I can go outside to play, to eat something and so on. In winter, It is cold, so I can\'t do something outside.
That\'s why I like summer.
강사 첨삭
Hello GeunYeong!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
In my case, My favorite season is summer.
>> In my case, my favorite season is summer.
OR
>> For me, my favorite season is summer.
First of all, I can do sports and exercise.
>> First of all, I can do sports and do some exercises.
I can\'t do exercise in winter because of low temperature.>> I can\'t do exercises during winter because of the low temperature.
Next, I can go outside to play, to eat something and so on.
Next, I can go outside to play, to eat something and so on.
>> Secondly, I can go outside and play or eat, etc.
In winter, It is cold, so I can\'t do something outside.
>> It\'s cold during winter so I can\'t do anything outside.
That\'s why I like summer.
That\'s why I like summer.
>> That\'s why I like summer more.
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