Homework Oct 14th

2019-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

The most unusual thing I ate is steamed silkworms of soy sauce. When I see steamed silkworms at first time, It looks bad. but now I like this food because It taste good.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The most unusual thing I ate is steamed silkworms of soy sauce.

>> The most unusual thing I have eaten was steamed silkworms with soy sauce.
When I see steamed silkworms at first time, It looks bad.

>> When I saw steamed silkworms for the first time, it looked bad.
but now I like this food because It taste good.

>> Now, I like this food because it tastes good.

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