Homework Oct 16th

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The last time I went to beach which is like a port, have no sands, is when I went to the trip in Osaka.

>> The last time I went to the beach, which was more like a port and it doesn\'t have sand, was when I went on a trip to Osaka.
(If the beach means that have sand there, I don\\\'t remember and I don\'t like beach because I hate swimming)

>> If by beach you mean that it has sand there, then I don\'t remember because I don\'t like the beach and I hate swimming.
I went to the beach because I wanted to get on small cruise that run for 1 hour.

>> I wanted to go on a small cruise that only took 1 hour.
The cruise seemed Columbus\\\'s ship, and showed me around Osaka port.

>> The cruise was on the Columbus\' Ship and it showed me around the port of Osaka.
Although it was cold in March, I was excited to see the sea around Osaka port.

>> Although it was cold in March, I was excited to see the sea around the port in Osaka.