Homework-Oct 21

2014-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Q: Do you have the guts to stand up for what you think is right? Cite where you have proven how courageous you are. Of course, I have. Sometimes there is some pressure in which we were forced to follow in some group such as work, class. In some cases, that is unfair and a bad custom. When we are under that kind of pressure, it is hard for us not to do that practice. But I try to live following my will and my belief. There are some cases I defeat soial pressure. I don't like bullying weak person since childhoodoppose. I oppose to receive favor involving my business.

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Good day, [이름]! What can you say about your homework today? Did you find the question quite interesting? As for your answer, I really find it very telling and even more intriguing. Based on how I came to know you so far, you are a very gentle person. What I\'m so curious about is how you are going to make your voice be heard as you oppose something or someone at work. At the hindsight, you have what it takes to do such. Thanks for sharing this with me. SHARE MORE!!! Until then [이름]! Stay safe. _Klein Q: Do you have the guts to stand up for what you think is right? Cite where you have proven how courageous you are.Of course, I have. >>CorrectSometimes there is some pressure in which we were forced to follow in some group such as work, class. >>Sometimes there are some pressures in which we are forced to follow some groups such as at work or in a class. In some cases, that is unfair and a bad custom.When we are under that kind of pressure, it is hard for us not to do that practice. But I try to live following my will and my belief.There are some cases I defeat soial pressure. >>Correct! [spelling check: social] I don\'t like bullying weak person since childhoodoppose. >> I don\'t like bullying a weak person since childhood. I oppose to receive favor involving my business. >>Correct!

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