Homework Oct 21th

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

In my case, my most valued possession is a computer.

>> In my case, my most valued possession is my computer.

OR

>> For me, my computer is my most valued possession. 
First of all, there are a lot of computer games. when I\'m stressed out, It feels good to play computer games.

>> First of all, it feels good to play computer games when I\'m stressed out and it\'s good that there are a lot of computer games.
The other point I like is to help me study easily.

>> Another reason that I like my computer is that it helps me to study easily.
When I don\'t understand a problem, It is convenient and handy for me to search and to help solve the problem.

>> Whenever I don\'t understand a problem, it is convenient and handy for me to search for the solution to the problem on the computer.
That\'s why my most valued possession is my computer.

>> CORRECT!