Homework Oct 23th
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello GeunYeong!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
The longest trip I\'ve ever taken by car is when I drove my parent\'s car to Incheon.
>> The longest trip I\'ve ever taken by car was when I drove my parent\'s car to Incheon.
because I promised my friends to hang around
>> I went there because I promised my friends I would hang out with them.
It takes three and a half hours to Incheon and It\'s hard for me to drive by myself.
>> It takes a three and a half hour drive to get to Incheon.
It\'s hard for me to drive by myself.
>> It was hard for me to drive by myself.
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