Homework Oct 25th

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think there are many advantages on living in a city.

>> I think there are many advantages in living in a city.
First of all, a city has a lot of convenience facilities like libraries, markets, theaters and book stores so on.

>> First of all, a city has a lot of convenient facilities like libraries, markets, theaters, book stores, and so on.
When I want to buy something at a market, It takes shorter time to go there than living in a country.

>> When I want to buy something at the market, it takes me a shorter time to get there than if I\'m living in the countryside.
Also, city has an array of transportation. 

>> Secondly, the city also has different types of transportation.  

In a country, there are a little buses and bus stops.

>> While in the countryside, there are a few buses or bus stops.