Homework Oct 30th

2019-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I think game is interesting about our culture. In Korea, There are a lot of progamers who won the first prizes at each game. And there are a lot of people whose hoppies are playing games.

강사 첨삭

Hello GeunYeong!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think game is interesting about our culture.

>> I think the games are what\'s interesting about our culture.
In Korea, There are a lot of progamers who won the first prizes at each game.

>> In Korea, there are a lot of programmers who won first prize at the game they play.
And there are a lot of people whose hoppies are playing games.

>> There are also a lot of people whose hobbies are playing games.

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