Homework-October 6

What do you like about travelling? I like travelling a lot. First, It gives me much opportunities to widen my knowledge and experiences. And those things motivate me to be able to make progress. That's why the experiences and knowledge earned from travelling are not forgotton well and have long and strong imfluence on me. Another good point of travelling is that there are many chances to make a friend who have a differnt backgound regardless of age. I can easily get close with other people while travelling, especially climbing mountain, which I have been into. So I love travelling.

Greetings, [이름]! Thank you for dropping by on the board once more. Actually, I think more than half of the people in the world love travelling because of the same reasons that you just mentioned. Very well said! I only provided very minimal corrections. You are good to go [이름]! _Klein What do you like about travelling?I like travelling a lot. >>Correct First, It gives me much opportunities to widen my knowledge and experiences. >>First, it gives me much opportunity to widen my knowledge and experiences. And those things motivate me to be able to make progress. >>CorrectThat\'s why the experiences and knowledge earned from travelling are not forgotton well and have long and strong imfluence on me. >>Correct [spelling check: forgotten; influence]Another good point of travelling is that there are many chances to make a friend who have a differnt backgound regardless of age. I can easily get close with other people while travelling, especially climbing mountain, which I have been into. So I love travelling. >>Correct! [spelling check: different; background]