homework of 1th, may
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Essay in not more than seven sentences:
What animal best represents you? Why?
Needless to say, cat represents me the best. I didn't act like a cat on purpose to make myself that kind of person. But people around me say like that. Usually, my favorite way to spend time is to stay at silent home under the sunshine sipping a bottle of coffee with my cat. Since i'm like this, and fond of being alone, my daddy says "She looks like totally feline."
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And you finished another homework. Thank you for answering the essay question.
Have a good evening.
~Kelly
Essay in not more than seven sentences:
What animal best represents you? Why?
Needless to say, cat represents me the best.
>> Needless to say, a cat represents me the best.
I didn\'t act like a cat on purpose to make myself that kind of person.
>> Correct.
But people around me say like that.
>> Correct.
Usually, my favorite way to spend time is to stay at silent home under the sunshine sipping a bottle of coffee with my cat.
>> Usually, my favorite way to spend my time is to stay silently at home while sipping a cup of coffee with my cat.
Since i\'m like this, and fond of being alone, my daddy says \"She looks like totally feline.\"
>> Since I\'m like this, and fond of being alone, my daddy says \"She looks totally like Feline.\"
And you finished another homework. Thank you for answering the essay question.
Have a good evening.
~Kelly
Essay in not more than seven sentences:
What animal best represents you? Why?
Needless to say, cat represents me the best.
>> Needless to say, a cat represents me the best.
I didn\'t act like a cat on purpose to make myself that kind of person.
>> Correct.
But people around me say like that.
>> Correct.
Usually, my favorite way to spend time is to stay at silent home under the sunshine sipping a bottle of coffee with my cat.
>> Usually, my favorite way to spend my time is to stay silently at home while sipping a cup of coffee with my cat.
Since i\'m like this, and fond of being alone, my daddy says \"She looks like totally feline.\"
>> Since I\'m like this, and fond of being alone, my daddy says \"She looks totally like Feline.\"
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