homework of august 10th

2016-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Leadership is not a one talent, but a complex of talents. A dicisiveness, mildness, catholicity and others are component of the leadership. If there is a person who has all of that talents by nature, he/she is maybe inborn leader. However even if someone has just a few things of the component of the readership, he/she can be a good leader with a little bit of effort. In fact, a person who has all of that talents is almost impossible. Therefore, everyone needs a effort and teaching to be a good leader. By the way, if he/she has not any component of the leadership, he/she can’t be a good reader even if he/she get teaching or take a lot of effort. As result, leadership skill is kind of acquired ability because to improve leadership skill he/she need some effort or teaching. However it is also kind of innate ability because to improve leadership skill he/she must have a component of the leadership. In other words, I think leadership skill is both innate ability and acquired ability.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Sarah! Thank you for doing your homework. You shared some really good thoughts here. Kindly review my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Leadership is not a one talent, but a complex of talents. >> Leadership is not just one talent, but a combination of many talents. A dicisiveness, mildness, catholicity and others are component of the leadership.>> Decisiveness, mildness and catholicity are some of the components of a good leader.  If there is a person who has all of that talents by nature, he/she is maybe inborn leader. >> If there is someone who has all of that by nature, then he or she is a born leader. However even if someone has just a few things of the component of the readership, he/she can be a good leader with a little bit of effort. >> However, if someone only has a few of those components, he or she can still be a good leader with a little bit of effort. In fact, a person who has all of that talents is almost impossible. >> In fact, it\'s impossible for someone to have all of that. Therefore, everyone needs a effort and teaching to be a good leader. >> Therefore, everyone needs effort and training to be a good leader. By the way, if he/she has not any component of the leadership, he/she can’t be a good reader even if he/she get teaching or take a lot of effort. >> If a person does not have any component of a good leader, then he or she won\'t be a good leader despite his or her training and effort.As result, leadership skill is kind of acquired ability because to improve leadership skill he/she need some effort or teaching. >> As a result, being a leader is kind of an acquired ability because it needs some effort or training in order to improve. However it is also kind of innate ability because to improve leadership skill he/she must have a component of the leadership. >> It is some kind of innate ability because, to improve one\'s leadership skills, he or she must have some components of being a good leader. In other words, I think leadership skill is both innate ability and acquired ability. >> In other words, I think being a good leader requires both an innate ability and an acquired ability.

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