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I want to be a rich person. If I don\'t have money, I can\'t give any things to my family. I want to give many things to my family. I think that family are most important of my life. But it would be very sad to have a bad relationship.
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I want to be a rich person.
>> Correct.
If I don\'t have money, I can\'t give any things to my family.
>>If I don\'t have money, I can\'t give anything to my family.
I want to give many things to my family.
>> Correct.
I think that family are most important of my life.
>> I think that my family are the most important people in my life.
But it would be very sad to have a bad relationship.
>>It would be very sad to have a bad relationship with them.
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