homework of monday
학생이 쓴 원문
WHO AM I
I am [Name] [이름] and I don\'t have english name. So you can just call me Ingoo.
Now, I\'m looking for a job. I want to work in semiconductor industry.
There are many foreign company in the semiconductor industry. so I need score of English.
My hobbies are singing and exercising. I almost everyday go to the gym. because of fitmess, I can be healthy and slim.
강사 첨삭
I am [Name] [이름] and I don\'t have english name. So you can just call me Ingoo.
>> I am [Name] [이름] and I don\'t have an English name. So you can just call me, \"Ingoo\".
Now, I\'m looking for a job. I want to work in semiconductor industry.
>> Now, I\'m looking for a job. I want to work in the semiconductor industry.
There are many foreign company in the semiconductor industry. so I need score of English.
>> There are many foreign companies in the semiconductor industry. So I need a good score in my English test.
My hobbies are singing and exercising. I almost everyday go to the gym. because of fitmess, I can be healthy and slim.
>> My hobbies are singing and exercising. I go to the gym almost every day because I would like to get fit. I can be healthy and slim.
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