homework of monday
학생이 쓴 원문
my favorite Toy was a Lego block. It was helpful about developing creativity for me. When I assemble the Lego, I was happy.
강사 첨삭
my favorite Toy was a Lego block.
>> My favorite toy since I was young was, \"Lego block\".
It was helpful about developing creativity for me.
>> It was helpful in developing my creativity.
When I assemble the Lego, I was happy.
>> When I assembled the Lego, I was happy.
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