homework of Wednesday
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could time travel, I would be 20 years old.
Because I didn\'t have much free time when I was 20.
I will enjoy my college life more.
강사 첨삭
If I could time travel, I would be 20 years old.
>> If I could time travel, I would like to be 20 years old again.
Because I didn\'t have much free time when I was 20.
>> It is because I didn\'t have much free time on my 20\'s.
I will enjoy my college life more.
>> I will enjoyed my college life more.
>>OR: I would like to enjoy my college life more.
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