Homework on Friday
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Congratulations for having a perfect score in your homework. Also, you\'ve got a strong opinion here. Yes, driving should not be associated with cellphone since it is really risky. Anyway, corrections are made below. Please do read and review them too. Happy weekend!
~T. Kelly
Kelly, have a nice weekend!;-)
1)smog
>>CORRECT
2)emission
>>CORRECT
3)acid rain
>>CORRECT
4)to recycle
>>CORRECT
5)to destroy
>>CORRECT
In my opinion, it would be better for both a driver & a passenger that the use of cell phones while driving a car should be prohibited.
>>In my opinion, the prohibition of cellphone use while driving is good for both the driver and the passenger/s.
First of all, talking over the cell phone can distract a driver\'s concentration while driving.
>>CORRECT
When a driver faces an emergency situation, he cannot take a prompt action.
>>CORRECT
Moreover, a driver can miss traffic signal much more time than usual.
>>Moreover, a driver could miss to abide the traffic signs often.
Driving a car is not available for multi tasking because it is related in someone\'s safe & valuable life.
>>Driving a car doesn\'t go with multitasking because it is related to someone\'s safety.
So, cell phones & driving are not good combination.
>>CORRECT
Not only a driver but also a passenger can be really in dangerous situation.
>> Not only the driver but also the passengers could face a dangerous situation.
Safe driving is important because it takes into consideration the lives of other people.
>>CORRECT
There is no sense risking your life for calling cell phone while driving.
>>There is no sense to risk your life because of cellphone.
Thus, I strongly agree that it does not act wise if someone is using a cell phone while driving because it is tied to our safety.
>>Thus, I strongly agree that it is not a wise act to use a cell phone while driving since it is tied up to our safety.
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