Homework on Friday! (Sorry, I'm late!)

Giselle~! This is the e-mail that I asked to check out from you in our class~! Thank you for your help and considertation. Have a nice weekend! My name is [이름] and I’m in charge of marketing and promotion at JNB. I previously worked at a cosmetics firm, THEFACESHOP which is an affiliated company of LG for 2 years. I hope this experience can assist the success of the new business into Korean market. I’m writing this to request you about various marketing tool such as high quality images to advertise brand. As you know, we have a plan to sell products on the internet, CJ Mall. So, I’m doing the design work to make ad images for local market. Moreover, I’m going to make our own website online for Korean consumers to spread awareness about Miquelrius. Therefore, it would be appreciated if you could share effective marketing resources such as images, photographs, model cuts (with products), brochure with us. I would be greatful if the type of document is psd or ai file because I can modify it more quickly. Let me know the address of webhard if you have. I attached our sample ad images for your reference. I think we need to start preparing now so that we can act quickly. You have a good understanding that this time is the most important steps to release new products in a new country. Thank you in advance for your help.

Hello there!^^
A marvelous Monday to you.^^
I have checked your composition and I think you did a great job. 
You just had some minimal errors  in incorporating punctuation marks.
Anyway, have a wonderful time!

Enjoy the rest to the day!
~~T. Giselle~~
Giselle~!
This is the e-mail that I asked to check out from you in our class~!

>>This is the e-mail I asked you to check in our class.
Thank you for your help and considertation. Have a nice weekend!

>>Thank you for your help and consideration.
Have a nice weekend!
>> Correct!
My name is [이름] and I’m in charge of marketing and promotion at JNB.

>>My name is [이름] and I\'m in charge of marketing and promotion at JNB
I previously worked at a cosmetics firm, THEFACESHOP which is an affiliated company of LG for 2 years.

>>I previously worked at a cosmetics firm THEFACESHOP, which was affiliated to LG for 2 years.
I hope this experience can assist the success of the new business into Korean market.

>>Correct!
I’m writing this to request you about various marketing tool such as high quality images to advertise brand.

>>I\'m writing this to request for various marketing tools such as high quality images to advertise a brand.
As you know, we have a plan to sell products on the internet, CJ Mall.

>>As you know, we have a plan to sell products on the internet at CJ Mall.
So, I’m doing the design work to make ad images for local market.

>> So, I\'m doing the design of the work to make ad images for the local market. 
 Moreover, I’m going to make our own website online for Korean consumers to spread awareness about Miquelrius.

>>Moreover, I\'m going to make our own website, online, for Korean consumers to spread awareness about Miquelrius.
Therefore, it would be appreciated if you could share effective marketing resources such as images, photographs, model cuts (with products), brochure with us.

>>Therefore, it would be appreciated if you could share effective marketing resources such as images, photographs, model cuts (with products), and brochures to us. 
 I would be greatful if the type of document is psd or ai file because I can modify it more quickly.

>>I would be grateful if the type of document is on psd or ai file so that I can modify it more quickly.
 Let me know the address of webhard if you have.

>>Let me know the address of the webhard if you have.
 I attached our sample ad images for your reference.

>>Correct!
>> Attached here are some ad images samples for your reference.
I think we need to start preparing now so that we can act quickly.

>>Correct!
You have a good understanding that this time is the most important steps to release new products in a new country.

>>You have a good understanding that this time is the best to release new products in a new country.
Thank you in advance for your help.

>>Correct!