Homework on Monday

Kelly~! Thank you for teaching me a lot! This is my second essay below. This is my life changing story. I was very proud of myself when I had a baby 4 months ago. For the first time, this was my first delivery, I felt uneasy and I was even frozen with fear. Labor pains were unimaginable. However, after having a baby boy, I realized another world and this experience made me to feel wondrous and amazing. My husband and I were so happy and excite to meet our son. Bearing and rearing my child let me become the maturing adult. Becoming a parent will bring great changes to my life. I believe I can be a good mother for my baby boy. We will both sort of grow up together. I learned true love and the importance of my family from this. 1) igtre - tiger 2) eepnalht - elephant 3) ifgeraf - giraffe 4) mecal - camel 5) doirccloe - crocodile 6) onkeym - monkey 7) rezba - zebra 8) onil - lion 9) ngkaoaro - kangaroo 10) enuigpn - penguin

Hello there [이름]! ^^, How are you doing? It is so great you finished your homework. I just finished checking it and you are terrific! You made a very short but concise essay, I was touched by it. You also got a perfect score for the 10 items about animals! I really hope you keep studying and doing your responsibilities! You take care always! :) T. Kelly Here are some of my corrections for you: This is my life changing story. >>Correct!  I was very proud of myself when I had a baby 4 months ago. >>Correct! For the first time, this was my first delivery, I felt uneasy and I was even frozen with fear. >>It was my first time to deliver a baby, I felt uneasy and frightened. Labor pains were unimaginable. >>The labor pains were unimaginable. However, after having a baby boy, I realized another world and this experience made me to feel wondrous and amazing. >>However, after having a baby boy, I think I\'m in a new world and this made me feel wonderful and amazed.  My husband and I were so happy and excite to meet our son. >>My husband and I were so happy and excited to meet our son.Bearing and rearing my child let me become the maturing adult. >>Bearing and rearing my child made me become a matured person. Becoming a parent will bring great changes to my life. >>Correct! I believe I can be a good mother for my baby boy. >>Correct! We will both sort of grow up together. >> Correct. >>We will both grow up together.  I learned true love and the importance of my family from this.>> I learned the value of true love and the importance of my family.   1) igtre - tiger >>Correct! 2) eepnalht - elephant >>Correct!3) ifgeraf - giraffe >>Correct!4) mecal - camel >>Correct!5) doirccloe - crocodile >>Correct! 6) onkeym - monkey >>Correct!7) rezba - zebra >>Correct!8) onil - lion >>Correct!9) ngkaoaro - kangaroo >>Correct!10) enuigpn - penguin >>Correct!