Homework on Monday

Hello there [이름]! Good morning. Thank you for your homework and for your essay. I agree with you that it\'s more fun to live with someone. We can learn how to establish good relationships with other people. Anyway, see you in class.

---Teacher Kelly--- 

Sorry, I uploaded my homework so late!

1.c. glanced

>>correct.

2.a. searched

>>correct.

3. c. roared

>> d. tossed

4. b. poured

>>correct.

5. c. sobbed

>>correct.

I prefer to live with a roommate for two reasons.

>>correct.

To begin with, I can\'t feel being lonely all day long if I live with a roomate.

>>correct.

>>OR: I won\'t feel lonely all day long if I live with a roommate.

>> Please be careful with the spelling of roommate.

I can study and hang out together. 

>> We can study and hang out together.

Moreover, if I have a trouble to do my assignment, roommate can help me.

>>  Moreover, if I have a trouble doing my assignment, my roommate can help me.

Secondly, In these days, most modern people are generally individualistic and getting more being sellfish.

>> Secondly, these days, most modern people are generally individualistic and getting more selfish.

However, If I live with other person, I can learn how to handle living in harmony with other.

>>  However, If I live with another person, I can learn how to live in harmony with others.

In addition, I also can learn valuable social skills such as human relations, communal living and teamwork, responsibilty.

>> In addition, I can also learn valuable social skills such as human relations, communal living and teamwork, and responsibility.

Someone who stay alone in a dormitory, can hardly make friends if him or her own compayny all the time.

>> A person who stays alone in a dormitory can hardly make friends all the time.

All things considered, I will saty with a roomate above reasons.

>>  All things considered, I will stay with a roommate for the above reasons.