homework on the sixth March
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello SPRING!
I felt sad reading your letter.
I could feel great desire of meeting your dear friend again.
I hope that one day in the near future, you\'ll be able to spend time with her just like in the past.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Hi Shanee
I\'m Spring
QUOTE FOR THE DAY:
“Obstacles are designed to make you stronger, only the weak avoid them.” Anonymous
HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
If you had the opportunity to bring any person from the past or present, fictional or nonfictional to a place that is special to you (your hometown or country, a favorite location, etc.), who would you bring and why?
If I had the opportunity to bring anyone, I would bring a friend of mine.
>>> Correct!
Because I and she was at the same school, hanging along with me.
>>> Because she and I were hang a lot when we were still studying in the same school.
but she\'s now far from here.
>>> But now, she\'s far from here.
So, sometimes she could connet me by letters.
>>> So, she can only send me letters.
as time goes by she could get her life there.
>>> As times went by, she was able to establish herself there.
I focus on my life too in Korea.
>>> I also focus on my life here in Korea.
Although I couldn\'t connect her any more, I hope we could meet in the dream.
>>> Although, I couldn\'t connect with her anymore, I hope we could meet at least in our dreams.
Bye ~~
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