homework on the sixth March

2018-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Hi Shanee I'm Spring QUOTE FOR THE DAY: “Obstacles are designed to make you stronger, only the weak avoid them.” Anonymous HOMEWORK: Composition writing! If you had the opportunity to bring any person from the past or present, fictional or nonfictional to a place that is special to you (your hometown or country, a favorite location, etc.), who would you bring and why? If I had the opportunity to bring anyone, I would bring a friend of mine. Because I and she was at the same school, hanging along with me. but she's now far from here. So, sometimes she could connet me by letters. as time goes by she could get her life there. I focus on my life too in Korea. Although I couldn't connect her any more, I hope we could meet in the dream. Bye ~~

강사 첨삭

Hello SPRING!

I felt sad reading your letter.

I could feel great desire of meeting your dear friend again.

I hope that one day in the near future, you\'ll be able to spend time with her just like in the past.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


Hi Shanee
I\'m Spring

QUOTE FOR THE DAY:
“Obstacles are designed to make you stronger, only the weak avoid them.” Anonymous

HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
If you had the opportunity to bring any person from the past or present, fictional or nonfictional to a place that is special to you (your hometown or country, a favorite location, etc.), who would you bring and why?

If I had the opportunity to bring anyone, I would bring a friend of mine.

>>> Correct!

Because I and she was at the same school, hanging along with me.

>>> Because she and I were hang a lot when we were still studying in the same school.

but she\'s now far from here.

>>> But now, she\'s far from here.

So, sometimes she could connet me by letters.

>>> So, she can only send me letters.

as time goes by she could get her life there.

>>> As times went by, she was able to establish herself there.

I focus on my life too in Korea.

>>> I also focus on my life here in Korea.

Although I couldn\'t connect her any more, I hope we could meet in the dream. 

>>> Although, I couldn\'t connect with her anymore, I hope we could meet at least in our dreams.

Bye ~~

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