homework :p
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you love about yourself the most? Explain why.
-> As I get this question, I've thought about myself for a while. Thank you that I could remind myself !
I love my optimistic mind the most. I used to be upset whenever the situation that I don't want to happens and I was very selfish person. But whenever I was upset and furious about something, nothing was different, it was always same. It just goes. And time goes by, I learned that as the things happens even it's not my want, I have to accept it and think positively. I controlled my mind a lot to change. But now I am very optimistic !
강사 첨삭
Hi there ^-^
I\'m happy because you\'ve chosen to change for the better.
I know at times a lot of things happen against our will.
But most of the time, it happens for a good reason.
Or if not, it give us lesson that we can apply later in life.
Anyway, thank you for sharing this to me.
Take care always :)
Teacher Kristel
Here are my corrections:
What do you love about yourself the most? Explain why.-> As I get this question, I\'ve thought about myself for a while.
>> When I got this question, I\'ve thought about myself for a while.
>> When I read this question, I\'ve thought about myself for a while.
Thank you that I could remind myself !
>>Correct :)
>>OR: Thank you for letting me remind myself.I love my optimistic mind the most.
>>I love my being optimistic.
>>What I love the most is being optimistic.I used to be upset whenever the situation that I don\'t want to happens and I was very selfish person.
>>I used to be upset when I\'m on situations that I don\'t want to happen because I\'m a selfish person.But whenever I was upset and furious about something, nothing was different, it was always same.
>>Correct :)It just goes.
>>Correct :)
>>OR: Then, it just pass.
And time goes by, I learned that as the things happens even it\'s not my want, I have to accept it and think positively.
>>And as time goes by, I learned that things happen even if it\'s not what I want so I have to accept it and think positively.I controlled my mind a lot to change.
>>To change, I learned to control my mind.
>>To change, I learned to control myself.But now I am very optimistic !
>> Correct :)
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