HOMEWORK~!! :P
학생이 쓴 원문
1.
I think it\'s possible except except the cat family. Because it\'s scientifically proven. There is a dog infected by coronavirus in Korea.
And it is very serious happen. Therefore, we have to be careful more and more.
2.
I think the most importance are the government\'s active support and the high civic consciousness. The government has to make a vaccine quickly to contain the virus. Ultimately, the government must have a perfect plan. And the citizens must show a high civic consciousness from the coronavirus. However, Korea lacks both. So, Korea is suffering great damage by the coronavirus. Therefore, the Korean government and Korean people must try more and more from the coronavirus.
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Lucy
I think it\'s possible except except the cat family.
>>I think it\'s possible except the cat family.
Because it\'s scientifically proven.
>>CORRECT!
There is a dog infected by coronavirus in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
And it is very serious happen.
And it is very serious happen.
>>And it is very serious.
Therefore, we have to be careful more and more.
>>CORRECT!
I think the most importance are the government\'s active support and the high civic consciousness.
>>CORRECT!
I think the most importance are the government\'s active support and the high civic consciousness.
>>I think the most important is the government\'s active support and the high civic consciousness.
The government has to make a vaccine quickly to contain the virus.
>>CORRECT!
Ultimately, the government must have a perfect plan.
>>CORRECT!
And the citizens must show a high civic consciousness from the coronavirus.
>>CORRECT!
However, Korea lacks both.
>>CORRECT!
So, Korea is suffering great damage by the coronavirus.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, the Korean government and Korean people must try more and more from the coronavirus.
>>Therefore, the Korean government and Korean people must try more and more to defeat the coronavirus.
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