Homework(perfect relationship)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! You wrote very good sentences and you have minimal errors.
Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate that.
You are open-minded to everything, something that people should also have. ^^
~~May~~
Teacher Tomorrow, I will have a lunch appointment with Colleagues after class, so I submit my homework in advance.
>> Teacher, tomorrow I will have lunch with my colleagues after the class, so I submitted my homework in advance.
Or >> Teacher, tomorrow I have a lunch appointment with my colleagues after the class, so I submitted my homework in advance.
Maybe we are going to have some Galbi-tang(short rib soup)~ have a nice lunch^^
>> CORRECT
People cannot live alone and we must help each other. In other words, we need someone\'s help to live well in the world.
To put it simply, there are countless books in the world (Of course, the world is wider than the books~).
\'How many percent of them do we know? 2% or 5%.\'
hence, we can\'t help but depend on people who know other fields of knowledge.
>> CORRECT
A perfect relationship is a good relationship for each other.
>> A perfect relationship is a good relationship.
we must recognize and respect each other\'s differences. Through it, we can learn various wisdoms of life.
>> CORRECT
Excessive arrogance and self-righteousness are never wise in this wide world.
>> Too much arrogance and selfishness are never wise in this wide world.
They are not good for themselves who have such tendencies.
>> CORRECT
In conclusion, a perfect relationship is the result of each other\'s respect and effort and the way for each other.
>> In conclusion, a perfect relationship is the result of respect and effort for each other.
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