Homework : Preposition

2014-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm Peter and I live in Germany. During summer I like to travel to Italy, because of the weather and the people there. Last summer I took a plane from Munich to Rome. From the airport we went to our hotel by bus. We stopped at a small restaurant for a quick meal. The driver parked the bus behind the restaurant. Nobody could find the bus and the driver, so we waited outside the restaurant for one hour. The driver was walking through the small park near the restaurant which we did not know. So we were very angry with him. But my holidays were great. We sat round campfires and went dancing till the early mornings.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!:)

You\'ve done well here. You just overlooked one. I am sure that you know this.

Do check it below.

See you later in class.

Teacher Rowena


I\'m Peter and I live in Germany.

>>CORRECT!

During summer I like to travel to Italy, because of the weather and the people there.

>>In summer I like to travel to Italy, because of the weather and the people there.

Last summer I took a plane from Munich to Rome.

>>CORRECT!

From the airport we went to our hotel by bus.

>>CORRECT!

We stopped at a small restaurant for a quick meal.

>>CORRECT!

The driver parked the bus behind the restaurant.

>>CORRECT!

Nobody could find the bus and the driver, so we waited outside the restaurant for one hour.

>>CORRECT!

The driver was walking through the small park near the restaurant which we did not know.

>>CORRECT!

So we were very angry with him. But my holidays were great.

>>CORRECT!

We sat round campfires and went dancing till the early mornings.

>>CORRECT!

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