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1.
I have watched Mukbang on Youtube.
And I don\'t watch Mukbang often.
However I can understand why people watch Mukbang.
Because they are good at eating all food and they can eat it deliciously.
So people who are watching Mukbang can\'t control their appetite.
It\'s not the Mukbang on Youtube, when celebrities are having foods which are looking delicious at night in the TV show program I also make foods right now.
2.
When I was in high school, I ate a lot of anything with one of friends.
I was hungry everyday when I was a student and I didn\'t get fat.
So all my friends have told me \"\"You could die If you keep eating like that\".
But I\'m not dead at that time.
Therefore, I liked to eat a lot when I was a student beacuse I wanted to grow taller.
But now, I don\'t like to eat a lot for good health and I eat enough these days.
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Thank you An!
~Lucy
I have watched Mukbang on Youtube.
>>CORRECT!
And I don\'t watch Mukbang often.
And I don\'t watch Mukbang often.
>>CORRECT!
However I can understand why people watch Mukbang.
However I can understand why people watch Mukbang.
>>However, I can understand why people watch Mukbang.
Because they are good at eating all food and they can eat it deliciously.
>>CORRECT!
So people who are watching Mukbang can\'t control their appetite.
So people who are watching Mukbang can\'t control their appetite.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s not the Mukbang on Youtube, when celebrities are having foods which are looking delicious at night in the TV show program I also make foods right now.
It\'s not the Mukbang on Youtube, when celebrities are having foods which are looking delicious at night in the TV show program I also make foods right now.
>>It\'s not the Mukbang on Youtube, when celebrities are having foods which are looking delicious at night in the TV show program I also make food at that moment.
When I was in high school, I ate a lot of anything with one of friends.
>>When I was in high school, I ate a lot with one of my friends.
I was hungry everyday when I was a student and I didn\'t get fat.
I was hungry everyday when I was a student and I didn\'t get fat.
>>CORRECT!
So all my friends have told me \"\"You could die If you keep eating like that\".
So all my friends have told me \"\"You could die If you keep eating like that\".
>>CORRECT!
But I\'m not dead at that time.
But I\'m not dead at that time.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, I liked to eat a lot when I was a student beacuse I wanted to grow taller.
Therefore, I liked to eat a lot when I was a student beacuse I wanted to grow taller.
>>Therefore, I liked to eat a lot when I was a student because I wanted to grow taller.
But now, I don\'t like to eat a lot for good health and I eat enough these days.
>>CORRECT!
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