Homework &Question

Writing Exercise: What personality trait is the most important for inner beauty? Answer in 5 sentences or more. In my personal opinion, a kind and friendly person looks more beautiful. And especially people who come out of their true hearts and help and donate to people in need, I think they are really warm-hearted and great. Those people seem to be beautiful internally. For example, Nightingale or Mother Teresa and so on.. and Teacher~ Actually, there\'s something I said in class, but as I was reviewing it, I thought I didn\'t say it properly. So I looked up the dictionary after class and Could you check if this sentence is correct in grammar please? In the past, a very famous drama called \"Lovers in Paris\" was aired in Korea, and it was filmed against the backdrop of Paris. The drama had a viewer rating of over 50%. At that time, I experienced Paris indirectly while watching the drama.