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Hello there [이름]!

We\'re almost done with the week again.

Yahoo! Thanks for doing your essay.

I also feel the same way. But we have to be positive.
We should be strong. ^^

Actually, you did a marvelous job!

I admire you for elaborating your ideas well. Keep it up!

I already made the necessary corrections below.
If you have any questions, feel free to tell me.
S V DO IO means, subject -verb-direct object- indirect object. ^^

It is the basic sentence pattern.

Talk to you soon. Take Care!

Teacher Nina

At first, I feel very uncomfortable if someone disagrees with everything I say without any rational reasons.

>> Correct

>> OR: At first, I don\'t feel at ease, if someone disagrees with everything I say without any valid reasons.

Unfortunately, the thing is some people make me embarrased just blaming all things.

>> Did you mean: Unfortunately, the thing is, some people make me feel embarrassed just for blaming things to me.

>> OR: Unfortunately, some people embarrass me for blaming all of the things to me.

At that moment, my heart is scratched deeply and I don\'t want to say anything anymore.

>> At that moment, my heart was torn and I don\'t want to say anything anymore.

>> OR: At that moment, I was hurt and I don\'t want to say anything anymore.

I\'m very discouraged and lose my confidence.

>> I was very discouraged and lost my confidence.

However, if someone has definite reasons for disagreement, I\'m obliged to it because I can learn from disagreement.

>> However, if someone has definite reasons for disagreement, I\'m obliged to listen to it because I can learn from it.

People who have brilliant thoughts and great perspectives to the world can give me good advice.

>> People who have brilliant thoughts and great perspectives about the world, they can give me good advice.

>> OR: People who have brilliant thoughts and great perspectives about the world, they can give me pieces of advice.

Thanks to them, I can correct my wrong thoughts or inappropriate decisions and can make a change to a new viewpoint unlike before./

>> Did you mean: Thanks to them, I can correct my wrong thoughts or inappropriate decisions and I can have a new point of view unlike before.
>> OR: Thanks to them, I can correct my wrong thoughts or inappropriate decisions. I can have a different perspective now.

I think my essay is scatterd and not focused.

>> Correct ( scattered ^^)

>> OR: I think my essay is not organized.

I want to write better.

>> Correct

Since my vacation started,I\'ve been lazy.

>> Correct

>> OR: Since my vacation started, I became lazy.

I wake up too late and don\'t study hard UNLIKE my first resolution.

>> Correct

>> OR: I wake up too late and I don\'t study hard unlike what I have planned.

I need to be more diligent!

>> Correct

I have to be on a diet but I\'m NOT being on it well.

>> Did you mean: I have to be on a diet but I\'m not doing it well.

I consider preparing a test.

>> Did you mean: I am considering to prepare for a test.

>> OR: I consider preparing for a test.

It\'ll be useful./

>> Correct

What\'s \'S V DO IO\' in feedback?

>> What does S V DO IO mean?