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2020-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you have any favorite author? Answer in 5 sentences or more. In fact, I don\'t know much about writers because I havn\'t read many books Since I was young. If I were to read a book, there were novels or comic books. and even after I became an adult, I read webtoons. The writer that comes to mind is Gian 84, a successful webtoon writer. and Teacher I\'d like to check if these sentences are correct in grammar Could you please check these sentences too? My name means the moon. Actually, I searched for many pretty English names while I am making English names. Among them, [이름] was a candidate. But at the first time, I didn\'t want to name as [이름]. Because it was a heroine\'s name in the animation that I saw when I was young. The animation was so famous that a lot of people knew its name, I thought it might sound a little childish. But when I aske the foreigners which one was the prettiest of the candidates for the English name They said [이름] was the best, so I decided to use it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
I hope this will help you in both writing and speaking.
You can make use of the corrections for both.
Thank you for always being diligent.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In fact, I don\'t know much about writers because I havn\'t read many books Since I was young. 
>> It\'s a fact that I don\'t know much about writers because I haven\'t read many books since I was young. 
If I were to read a book, there were novels or comic books. 
>> If I were to read a book, they would be novels or comic books.
and even after I became an adult, I read webtoons. 
>> Even as an adult, I read web toons. 
The writer that comes to mind is Gian 84, a successful webtoon writer.
>> Correct
My name means the moon. 
>> My name means \"the moon.\"
Actually, I searched for many pretty English names while I am making English names. 
>> Actually, I searched for many pretty English names when I was choosing one.
Among them, [이름] was a candidate. 
>> Among them, \"[이름]\" was an option.
But at the first time, I didn\'t want to name as [이름]. 
>> I didn\'t want the name, \"[이름]\" at first.
Because it was a heroine\'s name in the animation that I saw when I was young.
>> It was because it was a heroines\'s name in an animation that I saw when I was young.
The animation was so famous that a lot of people knew its name, I thought it might sound a little childish.
>> The animation was so famous that a lot of people knew the name and I thought it might sound a little childish.
But when I aske the foreigners which one was the prettiest of the candidates for the English name They said [이름] was the best, so I decided to use it.
>> However, when I ask foreigners which was the prettiest of the options for an English name, they said \"[이름]\" was the best, so I decided to choose it.

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